[NOTE: This is the first essay in Pete Tzinski's 7 part series leading up to the premiere of the new Star Trek film.]

In a little over a week, Star Trek comes back into our lives with a face-lift, courtesy of J.J. Abrams. It hasn’t been away all that long, although it feels like a lifetime to us fans. I’ve been ruminating on Star Trek for reasons unrelated to the new movie for some time, but figured that this would be a good time to talk about Trek and me.

The first series, simply called Star Trek was the least-popular of any of the series. It was unpopular enough to be canceled. It was brief, but world-changing. You don’t need me to tell you how big a deal Star Trek was, although after the show was canned, it did take a while for the world to take the hint and realize its importance. Star Trek went beyond a television series and became a phenomena, as ingrained into us, whether we like it or not, as Superman, or Bugs Bunny. It all started with this first series, and its 79 episodes.

However, the series wasn’t that big a deal for me as I was growing up. It wasn’t that exciting a show to a young child. The bright colors and clunky computers didn’t excite me in the way that Star Wars, for example, was doing, and the idea that this Star Trek show had been around long before Star Wars didn’t occur to me. The stories, too, didn’t leave me with anything significant.


It wasn’t merely my age that kept the series from appealing to me, though; it was also that my family moved a lot as I was growing up, in and out of the country. Combine that with sporadic television habits on my part, and the off-and-on periods in which we actually had television, and it meant that I didn’t see the original series often enough for it to do anything. It didn’t get my attention the way other things did, the way Star Wars, and I Love Lucy, and M*A*S*H, and the various eclectic pieces of television absorption did.

I was married and had already delighted in three of the other four Star Trek series before I really got around to paying attention to the Original Series. (And even though I had seen the movies many times and loved them, that Kirk, Spock, McCoy, and the others, in my mind, bore little resemblance to the television show’s characters).

Of all the Star Trek series, this is actually the one I have the least to say about, because of the reasons I mentioned above, and because of my age. I’m not that old. Star Trek was well into the world by the time I joined the party. Anything that exists in the world before you were born is not revolutionary or cool at first. It’s just part of the natural order of things.

The thing that impressed me the most about the original Star Trek was the writing. And the writers, once I knew enough to recognize names. This is the series which had authors like D.C. Fontana and Harlan Ellison on its list of writing credits. That impresses me, the older I get.

The writing, though, had to do the work of everything in the show. There just wasn’t the capability for huge and exhilarating special effects. What the show frequently had to consist of was just simple character conflicts, much in the same way that the Twilight Zone really didn’t need an impressive budget. It had the writing and the atmosphere. It was a generation of TV shows (some of them) which did the thing that old radio dramas used to rely on: evoke drama and images in the viewer’s imagination. Let the viewer’s mind do all the heavy lifting.

Thus, the writing, when it clicked, was powerful. The older I got, the more of a working writer I became, the more and more that struck me when I’d watch old episodes. “Let That Be Your Last Battlefield”, for example, was an episode I used in an article on race, which sent me back to watch it again. And yes, it’s pretty blatant, the racial statement being made there. One person is black on the left side, one person is white on the left side. Simplistic? Sure. But it accomplished its goal of making actual racial segregation seem a bit silly. Put into this new perspective, it was ridiculous. But once you went past that concept, you got a very simple story full of very powerful dialogue exchanges. Beautifully written stuff. And the story ended hauntingly. A fine tale.

Even a fairly problematic episode, like the one in which the Enterprise and a Romulan ship play cat-and-mouse, were brilliantly done. There were problems. The big one that always stuck out for me was, in the middle, why were they so desperately trying to run silent? To the point of freaking out when a console beeped? Sure, that makes sense in submarines, but….they’re in the vacuum of space. It can be a whisper or a sing-song, it’s not going to carry.

And yet, the writing was strong. The Romulan commander was an evocative, delightful character.

Finally, how can anyone talk about Star Trek without talking about “The City on the Edge of Forever”, by the above-mentioned Harlan Ellison? When I was young, it meant nothing to me. But why would it have done?

But these days, it evokes emotion, like any good story should. If you ask me, it’s the series’ finest moment. And really it’s the simplest. Nothing particularly space-science-fiction about it. Just a very, very minimal time-travel story in which, at the end, you only need ten seconds worth of footage to get to the reader. The quick-shot cuts between McCoy, and Kirk, and Edith, the car comes, there is a screech…and all we have to see is Kirk’s face. Like quite a lot of Harlan Ellison’s work, it reaches into your chest and tears out your heart without you realizing it’s going to happen.

And there were two other fine, fine moments which I only need to say three words to tell you about: Harcourt Fenton Mudd. ‘Nuff said.

I can’t just rave about the series, though. I realize I’m not the right generation for it, but…there was some dumb stuff in there. Spock playing with weird space-hippies? The pilot episode? The weird-two-parter episode in which Spock defends himself from court martial by playing the pilot episode? Er. The fun-but-dumb episode in which Kirk fought the Gorn? You get the idea.

Still, even if every episode had been dumb…the importance of this series can’t be denied, because of what it led to. In seventy-nine episodes, it created a cultural phenomenon. Without this original show, with its paper mache rockets and its strange Klingons, I very much doubt there would have been a Star Wars, or a Babylon 5, or a Farscape, or…well, pick your show that does anything in space. The odds would have been stacked much, much more against their existence without Star Trek.

If you don’t watch any of the others, go watch “The City on the Edge of Forever” and see if that doesn’t convince you into watching other episodes. I’m pretty sure it will.

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